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Mohib Ur Rehman's avatar

I hope all this doesn't become true....But, with all the stuff going on in the world - I can't hope for good. BTW, props for the creativity!

Mila Agius's avatar

Thanks dear Mohib 🙏

When it comes to our world and everything that’s happening every single day – I completely agree with you.

Sometimes it really feels like we’re being taught a new skill: how not to be surprised anymore… how to stop being shocked, how to become less sensitive. Things that just yesterday seemed completely unthinkable are turning into the new normal that we’re apparently supposed to accept and get used to.

It’s like some insane, hyper-accelerated Overton window conveyor belt.

By the way, I think I’m going to steal this idea about the Overton window for the next chapter of 2040 ))

Laura Ferraz Baick's avatar

We're already living in the beta version of Jamie's world. My smart home definitely judges my 2am decisions, just less politely lol

Mila Agius's avatar

Dear Laura, I’m dealing with exactly the same issues )) and on top of that, all sorts of calorie counters, blood pressure monitors and other electronic life coaches lol ))

But the system knows way more about Jamie than it does about us )) and thank God that even in 2025 there still isn’t too much known about us… There are still some private corners and personal space left.. long may it stay that way!

Laura Ferraz Baick's avatar

I couldn't agree more.

Dennis Berry's avatar

Great writing and story. Will be interesting to watch all of this unfold 🔥

Mila Agius's avatar

Thanks, Dennis!

I’ll keep working to make every chapter stronger 💪 both through the plot and through the special effects I’m learning from you here on Substack :)

Farida Khalaf's avatar

Captivating storytelling

Mila Agius's avatar

Thanks dear for kind words 🙏

Sam Illingworth's avatar

Love this, Mila! Such great writing. For me, I love how the Archivist is always a presence, even when they're not there in person. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Mila Agius's avatar

Thanks, dear Sam ) I'll try to make surprised and broke the logic in the next Chapter )

Joel Salinas's avatar

Excellent! And Love the graphics!!

Mila Agius's avatar

Thanks, my dear friend )

The visuals will turn out better, though sometimes it takes longer than you'd like )) But this skill is definitely super useful for tons of tasks, including your daily routine :)